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> This is the first file I am uploading for criticism of the group.
David,
You did a great job on this rendering!
I'm particularly taken with the way the cubes in the
foreground work so well with the background image
and bottle.
But you want criticism so I'll try:
1. I think I would cut the saturation of the blue you
used in the reflections on the cubes. That would
make the labels have a bit more punch than the
cubes and would help sell the product.
2. The droplets need a higher setting for the
shininess and a little less color. They look too blue
and should actually be greener because they are
on a green bottle.
3. I'd like to see the bottle have some darker areas
within it. I'm not sure how you can achieve that. Maybe
increase the transparency a bit. I don't see an inner
surface for the bottle. Did you model the bottle with
one?
4. I'm not sure if you rendered this with caustics
turned on or not. It might make the rendering time
explode, but it may help the bottle a little.
Doug
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Douglas Alden Peterson
Graphic & Web Design; Illustration
Visualeyes
Brighton, MI USA
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